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The Internet

(A)

A. We use the Internet or hear about it almost daily.B.However, there was a time when the

Internet was known to just a network of scientists who used it as a means to communicate

research information.C.They lived all over the world, the idea of calling on the phone was a major problem and

a major expense.D.Faxing was a problem also if they wanted to keep their ideas secret.E.This group of

international scientists needed a means to share their information with each other. 

(B)

(6) In 1989, computer scientist Timothy Berners-Lee created a system that enabled an elite group of scientists to

communicate with one another.(7) The original goal of the scientists is to share information that was numberand text-based.(8) This format was an easy procedure for the early computers and computer programs to use.

(C)

(9) Many other people were interested in this"new"exchange of information for a few reasons.(10) It was much

cheaper than a long distance phone call or fax, and it provided some privacy.(11) Soon, others were

experimenting with this new communication device.(12) Eventually, a group of people at the Massachusetts

Institute of technology developed the World Wide Web.

(D)

(13) Changes that are made in computers and the way they communicate with each other provide the

opportunity for the Web to evolve.(14) This evolution continue to change the way we all communicatewith each

other, too.(15) To do more than just communicate today, the Web is used.(16) Its a valuable marketing and

selling tool for businesses.(17) How interesting to think of the many new ways that this technology shaping our

future.

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Sentence 1This evolution continue to change the way we all communicate with each other, too.

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Sentence Susan Rable our director of medical services, informs me that tests such as these are normally

performed on patients who are experiencing various types of thyroid disorders.

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Ethnic Architecture

(A)

A. Here is a question that is not as silly as it sound:Have you ever wondered why houses are shaped the way

they are? B.Bringing with them many different ideas about how to build a house, settlers from around the world

have come to the United States for centuries.

(B)

B. Many of us today take for granted certain features of a house and forget that someone had to invent

them.D.The veranda, a covered porch that wraps around the front of many southern houses is probably an

adaptation of overhanging roofs found all over the world.E.In addition to the veranda, the South is known for its

cooking and its hospitality.(6) Long ago, home buildersresponded to hot, humid climates by making the cooling

shade of a porch a common feature of houses in such places as West Africa, Asia, and the Mediterranean are A.

(C)

(7) For instance, French settlers in New Orleans tried to put the frames of their homes directly on the ground as

they had done in France; however, the heat, humidity, and abundant rainfall caused the homes to rot within a

few years.(8) The settlers learned a lesson by observing the West Indian Creoles, which built raised houses with

many doors and windows to keep cool.

(D)

(9) Some settlers, like those from Germany, held on to their old building methods even though such methods

were no longer necessary.(10) Because of a shortage of wood in some parts of Germany, builders had

constructed half-timber houses; they used clay or brick to save wood.(11) When German immigrants settled in

Wisconsin where wood was abundant, they still built their familiar half-timber homes.(12) European peasants

and their animals once shared a shelter called a "house-barn," which allowed immediate care for the animals

during harsh whether.(13) Today’s covered breezeways serve a related purpose of protecting people who need

to go to their"car barns,"or garages.

(E)

(14) No matter which country settlers started from, they brought home-building traditions.(15) Some they

changed to adapt to their new land, some they abandoned,and

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Sentence 1European peasants and their animals once shared a shelter called a "house-barn," which allowed

immediate care for the animals during harsh whether.

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Sentence We want to help you taking care of all of your automotive needs.

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Sentence 1We would be honored by you’re presence.

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